14 May 2009 @ 10:46 pm
[info]snape100 ~ Adequate Effort SS/HP, R  
Title: Adequate Effort
Rating : R
Author: [info]lilyseyes
Word Count: 100x2
Challenge: [info]snape100 281: Cauldrons and Snitches
Warnings: *AU, post-war/Hogwarts, fluff, implied Mpreg*
Disclaimer: JKR owns the Potterverse – I just play in it. No money is made from these amateur works.
Summary: Severus allows Harry to make amends.






Severus slowly crumbled the dried nettles into the simmering cauldron between each even stroke, carefully counting when an object skimmed passed his head. A glint of gold was the only thing that kept him from jerking back reflexively, a move that could spell disaster at this stage of the intricate potion.

"Accio Snitch!"

Severus could see a sheepish grin on his lover's face as Harry deftly caught the fluttering toy. The young man carefully pressed a kiss on his jaw.

"I'm sorry, Severus, I was playing with Aiden."

Severus snorted. "I'll allow you to apologize properly, after our son's asleep."




"Really, Harry, you must find something other than animated cauldrons and Snitches to amuse the baby…oh, yes, right there!"

Severus groaned as Harry's tongue swirled around the tip of his cock. His husband moved his head, taking more of Severus' cock into the heat of his mouth, Severus could only hold on for the ride. Nothing brought him to his knees like Harry's sweet lips stretched around his prick, Severus thought, just before his body exploded with pleasure.

Not that Severus would reveal that information as Harry shuddered, slumping against him. Gathering Harry, Severus kissed him lingeringly.

"Adequate," Severus proclaimed.


 
 
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fancypantsdylan[info]fancypantsdylan on May 15th, 2009 01:36 am (UTC)
ya know an *Adequate* from Severus is really *bloody fantastic*, hehe
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:03 am (UTC)
Yes, indeed! Thanks!
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Beatrice Portinari: Dan Radcliffe-Prick Addict[info]torino10154 on May 15th, 2009 05:01 am (UTC)
*snort* As long as Harry can translate Sev's language, all is well. *g* Nice job.
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lilyseyes: cauldron[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:04 am (UTC)
I think Harry speaks *Snape*! Thanks!
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roguegambit[info]roguegambit on May 15th, 2009 05:26 am (UTC)
"Adequate" from Snape = exquisite? lol Great drabble. Love as always
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lilyseyes: cauldronkitty[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:05 am (UTC)
Yes, exactly! Thank you!
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brissygirl[info]brissygirl on May 15th, 2009 05:36 am (UTC)
That was so funny Harry trying to apologise with just a kiss, only to have Sev tel him he expects more.

I'm sure neither of them were complaining later when their son was sound asleep!
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lilyseyes: Snape w/wand[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:06 am (UTC)
They were too busy to complain! LOL!
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aeryun[info]aeryun on May 15th, 2009 06:37 am (UTC)
Lovely way to wake up in the morning! :D
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:06 am (UTC)
Thanks, sweetie - and I hope tomorrow goes well!
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aeryun[info]aeryun on June 1st, 2009 06:23 am (UTC)
Thank you.
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katiebell_0408[info]katiebell_0408 on May 15th, 2009 06:56 am (UTC)
Severus thinks he's being so sneaky, not telling Harry what he really thinks. But his body language proclaims all and I'm sure Harry knows that "Adequate" really means "Incredible."
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lilyseyes: DH Harry[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:10 am (UTC)
He's being 'Snapeish' but Harry understands! Thanks!
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majmunka: eyeHPSS[info]majmunka on May 15th, 2009 07:50 am (UTC)
I'm sure Harry understands Snape language perfectly :D
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lilyseyes: Profile[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:11 am (UTC)
Indeed - thanks, sweetie!
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leela_cat[info]leela_cat on May 15th, 2009 07:53 am (UTC)
I love starting my day with one of your ficlets. Very nice. Thank you.
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:11 am (UTC)
I am thrilled you enjoyed it!
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Bridget McKennitt: cpmsnarry[info]bridgetmkennitt on May 15th, 2009 09:15 am (UTC)
Mmm, this was wonderful. I love the interaction between Severus and Harry, how their love colors everything.
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lilyseyes: cauldronkitty[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:12 am (UTC)
I an so glad you enjoyed the drabbles! Thanks!
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sassy_cissa[info]sassy_cissa on May 15th, 2009 04:25 pm (UTC)
High praise from Sev! very nice, sweetie
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lilyseyes: Papachaiki[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:19 am (UTC)
LOL - yes, indeed! I am so glad you enjoyed it *smishes you*
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laurapetri[info]laurapetri on May 15th, 2009 05:38 pm (UTC)
Adequate Snape speak for mind blowing LOL
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:20 am (UTC)
LOL - yes, exactly!
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zephyr_macabee[info]zephyr_macabee on May 15th, 2009 05:42 pm (UTC)
Very adequate drabbles (in Severus-speak).
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lilyseyes: DH Harry[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:28 am (UTC)
LMAO! Thank you!
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alisanne[info]alisanne on May 15th, 2009 10:00 pm (UTC)
Hahahahaha!
Adequate=fabulous, no? *g*
Yum!
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lilyseyes: Severus Dumblesman[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:32 am (UTC)
Yes, indeed! Thank you, sweetie!
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ivylady[info]ivylady on May 16th, 2009 10:34 pm (UTC)
Aw, how cute! "Adequate" from Snape is the same as an "Outstanding" from anyone else.

I like the new layout.
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:35 am (UTC)
Thank you, sweetie!
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Kimberly[info]calanor on May 17th, 2009 02:01 am (UTC)
ahhh.. Naughty Harry..
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lilyseyes: cauldrongames[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:36 am (UTC)
*snickers* yes, indeed! And Severus loves it!
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morganlefay1958[info]morganlefay1958 on May 17th, 2009 04:43 am (UTC)
Oh Hell!! I'd take an adequate from Severus any day!!!!

"I'll allow you to apologize properly, after our son's asleep."

*snicker*
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lilyseyes: Distant Snape[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:37 am (UTC)
LOL - me, too! Thanks, sweetie!
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hambares[info]hambares on May 17th, 2009 09:40 am (UTC)
Adequate is like saying A++++, right?
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:38 am (UTC)
Yes, indeed! :-)
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Your Royal Pie-ness: hp: draco faking it[info]entrenous88 on May 17th, 2009 05:34 pm (UTC)
Ahahaha, "Adequate." :D
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lilyseyes: cauldronkitty[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:39 am (UTC)
LOL! Yes!
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keyairreem[info]keyairreem on May 20th, 2009 12:31 pm (UTC)
Oh Harry knows exactly what he is doing when he 'distracts' Severus!
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on June 1st, 2009 03:39 am (UTC)
You are so right! LOL!
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