13 May 2009 @ 10:25 pm
[info]snarry100 ~ Pouty Breath SS/HP PG-13  
Title: Pouty Breath
Rating : PG-13
Author: [info]lilyseyes
Word Count: 100x3
Challenge: 161: Household Chores
Warnings: *Implied Mpreg, fluff*
Disclaimer: JKR owns the Potterverse – I just play in it. No money is made from these amateur works.
Summary: Glimpses life with the Potter-Snape family. Another in the Breathe Series
Thanks to the slash chat ladies for the once over ~ *smooches*
For Raki and [info]rakina you are in my thoughts.






Sevvy scampered up the steps, Dragon tucked under his arm. Daddy said he had to pick up his toys if he wanted his sweet af'er dinner. And Sevvy knew Daddy'd made 'take!

Putting Dragon on his big-boy bed, Sevvy looked around to make sure everyt'ing was in its 'pe'tial place. He liked when his t'ings were where they were 'pused to be. Papa said it meaned he was or'dani'zed, just like Papa was. Daddy was always helpin' Dobby and 'treacher 'teep the house 'tlean.

Looking at Lulu's things, Sevvy sighed, wishing she was old enough to pick up her toys.




"Come, my little princess, you are big enough to help, too."

Laurel looked up at Daddy with a frown. She was bus'de petting the 'titty!

Daddy smiled as he lift'd 'titty off her lap. "Sevvy has to pick-up his toys so that he can have some cake after dinner, and I think you are old enough to at least take Unicorn up to your room for me."

Laurel drabbed Uni'torn and held him up for Daddy to take upstairs for her, but Daddy just pointed at the 'tairs. Sighing, Laurel slid off the 'touch.

Maybe gettin' bid'er wasn't so good.




Harry shook his head as his daughter trudge up the stairs, biting his lip to keep from smiling. It seemed Laurel was less enthusiastic about helping than Sevvy was, but Harry refused to let the house-elves pick-up the children's toys.

Strong arms slid around his waist and Harry leaned back into his husband, allowing his smile to emerge.

"Why are you frowning, beloved?"

"Our daughter is attempting to emulate a Malfoy."

A soft snort tickled his ear before teeth nipped his earlobe. "Little Severus will sort her out, he's inherited my superb organizational abilities."

It was Harry's turn to snort.


 
 
Current Location: San Diego
Current Mood: pensive
 
 
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alisanne[info]alisanne on May 14th, 2009 12:46 am (UTC)
Pretty pouty princess!
*pets her*
So sweet! :)
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lilyseyes: Papalulu_Liz[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:29 am (UTC)
Thanks, darling!
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majmunka: cuteashell[info]majmunka on May 14th, 2009 01:29 am (UTC)
I love or'dani'zed!Sevvy :D just like his Papa :D
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lilyseyes: sevvysun[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:30 am (UTC)
*snickers* Thanks!
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brissygirl[info]brissygirl on May 14th, 2009 04:33 am (UTC)
That was so cute a bit of bribery goes a long way :)

I have a question, i tried to join your breath family community, but when i tried the pages came back with an error for some reason. I really enjoy reading this little universe you have created and would like to be able to read the NC17 stuff as well as the public stuff.
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lilyseyes: breathe family[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:31 am (UTC)
You should be all ready - and thanks!
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aeryun[info]aeryun on May 14th, 2009 06:41 am (UTC)
I wish my boys were as organized as Little Severus. :D
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lilyseyes: Sevvy Breathe[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:32 am (UTC)
LOL - I wish my husband was as organized!
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ivylady[info]ivylady on May 14th, 2009 07:01 am (UTC)
Poor Princess Lulu. It is hard getting bigger, but at least she has Sevvy to help her. *grins*

"Our daughter is attempting to emulate a Malfoy." LOL.
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lilyseyes: Papalulu_Liz[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:35 am (UTC)
LOL! Yes, indeed!
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leela_cat[info]leela_cat on May 14th, 2009 07:34 am (UTC)
Oh, this is very sweet. I love Harry in this.
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:35 am (UTC)
Thank you!
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sassy_cissa[info]sassy_cissa on May 14th, 2009 08:02 am (UTC)
Adorable!

I want Sevvy to come sort out my messy boys!! *hugs*
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:36 am (UTC)
LOL - Thank you, sweetie! I'll send Sevvy over to you!
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Minxie[info]the_minx_17 on May 14th, 2009 09:07 am (UTC)
*snort* I don't which has me so tickled: Maybe gettin' bid'er wasn't so good. or "Our daughter is attempting to emulate a Malfoy."

Either way... this is lovely, darlin'!
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lilyseyes: Papachaiki[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)
Thank you so much *smishes*
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hambares[info]hambares on May 14th, 2009 11:25 am (UTC)
The poor pouty one!
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lilyseyes: breathe family[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)
LOL - indeed!
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telwyrd[info]telwyrd on May 14th, 2009 05:52 pm (UTC)
Sevvy scampered up the steps, Dragon tucked under his arm. Daddy said he had to pick up his toys if he wanted his sweet af'er dinner. And Sevvy knew Daddy'd made 'take!

Cake! Yummy, yummy cake! Excellent motivation for lil Sevvy to pick up his toys. ::beams:: He's such a gooood boy...most of the time. ;)

Laurel drabbed Uni'torn and held him up for Daddy to take upstairs for her, but Daddy just pointed at the 'tairs. Sighing, Laurel slid off the 'touch.

Maybe gettin' bid'er wasn't so good.


Alas, baby Laurel needs to learn from her big brother's example.

"Our daughter is attempting to emulate a Malfoy."

Oh noes! She's not, really! Baby Laurel is still very young. She'll learn, I'm sure. ::nods vigorously::

A soft snort tickled his ear before teeth nipped his earlobe. "Little Severus will sort her out, he's inherited my superb organizational abilities."

Yes! See Severus also thinks lil Sevvy will sort out his baby sister. She won't be at all like Malfoy!

Fab and fun! Many thanks!


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lilyseyes: Papalulu_Liz[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:39 am (UTC)
LOL - no, our Lulu will not be like a Malfoy! *smooches*
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morganlefay1958[info]morganlefay1958 on May 14th, 2009 06:01 pm (UTC)
*giggle snort* Big brothers come in handy -- my oldest is a case in point when my daughter is being difficult.
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lilyseyes: breathe family[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:40 am (UTC)
Indeed they do!
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zirtaeb[info]zirtaeb on May 14th, 2009 07:47 pm (UTC)
I love reading these after a long day dreary day at work.
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arielhime[info]arielhime on May 14th, 2009 09:38 pm (UTC)
*laughs* I love it. Brilliant, my dear. Absolutely brilliant.
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lilyseyes[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:41 am (UTC)
Thank you, sweetie!
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felaine: lillies of the valley[info]felaine on May 14th, 2009 11:53 pm (UTC)
Love pouty Laurel. What do you bet she gets Sevvy to do the work for her?
Always delighted to read another glimpse of this life. Hope San Diego isn't doing you in.
Felaine
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lilyseyes: Sevvy Breathe[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:43 am (UTC)
Thank you, sweetie! San Diego gave me alot of course work to do before I go back in August, but its a good thing!
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magialuna: from my house perhaps?[info]magialuna on May 15th, 2009 05:54 am (UTC)
This was adorable. Just adorable. You confused me at first... I thought it was Severus as a child and we know HIS childhood was NOT so happy... but then I got it. Lovely fic. Very sweet and I love the family biplay at the end between Harry and Severus. Just so sweet. -Clare
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lilyseyes: breathe family[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:46 am (UTC)
Welcome - this is actually a series of drabbles and ficlets about this little universe. I'm afraid last time I checked the word count was approaching over 100k! You can find them all at [info]breathe_family

Thanks!
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Kimberly[info]calanor on May 17th, 2009 02:02 am (UTC)


It's time for Lulu to grow up???

and maybe time for another baby???

:D


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lilyseyes: babiesfar[info]lilyseyes on May 19th, 2009 02:47 am (UTC)
LOL - she is going on two, you know! :-)
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keyairreem[info]keyairreem on May 20th, 2009 12:27 pm (UTC)
So Sevvy will be the mature one, will he?
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